pmouth's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Super Short]

i protected this

i have to admit, this is one of the better sprite movies ive seen, but it is still just tweens, i would think that someone that can make a decent sprite movie could do a lot more if they made their own movie

HyperDoom responds:

I havent use a tween in this movie, its fram by frame (Ecept the credits, thats a tween)

[Sounds of CS]

great job on this

everything was great but two things you should do if you make a second

- there were long periods were it was the same sound over and over (not the gunshot sound but the same pattern of shots) and it is way too long, and made my interest fade, so either make more parts or shorten the long partd

- more scenes, i realize that its would be hard to draw for every scene, but like i said above, the same awp, team kill loop got very long, so make more of those short scenes like the nade part.

StealthBeast responds:

I changed it around alot more than people think actually. its just that alot of the scenes look sooo identicle lol. But yeah it was pretty long. in fact I was getting kinda tired of its length after awhile XD Thanks for the review! Sorry for taking so long to respond. I'm drowning in reviews right now.

[the sword of gonard]

i gave it a two

i didnt get the sotryline much but it looks like you r ushed on the graphics, you should speand more time and not just use tweens, and short fbf loops, it would have been a lot better if you speant more time

Dela responds:

sniff.... my first ever flash..

[Black & White:Atheism]

sorry but

this was in no way your own, you didnt even make your own preloader ffs, talking into a mic and dragging preset scenes in a game then calling it yours doesnt cut it sorry

Smon responds:

Wha...?

Preset scenes... isn't that what Knox did for the Matrix films?

also Sprite animation is dragging preset scenes from a game and calling it yours.

So... SHUN'D.

[shit in the sauna]

lol

awesome song, there were some probs tho, when the carrot slipped on the thing the subtitle text was unreadable bcuz the text and bg were the same colour

ZombieToaster responds:

glad you enjoyed it.

i know the problem, thats why i let the subbs wait alittle longer to dissapear so you could see them.

[N00bkebob #04]

well...

there was no point, and YES you are beginners in flash, do not deny it, im glad that you and a bunch of other beginners made a group, but please, before you submit to NG, think that what if i didn't make it, what would i vote. unlike some other groups such as clock crew, some of them might have skill, but they cannot make a single joke that i laugh at, it is horribly stupid i end up going WTF at the end.

N00bNation responds:

n00bnation is a place for good laughs and lots of fun. why not join us!

[SBC DEATH THEATER KILL]

why did i give you a one?

only because of the first one, i was thinnking of protecting it, till i saw pokemon, and then numa numa, then after that and two beatles songs (or just one im not sure) i gave it a 1

CDClock responds:

learn how to be smart kthx